“Hi Dan,

They’re all excellent!  I think my favourite is the top right, so I’ll go with that one for now, but could you squash the letters down to about half the height, to make it slightly more rectangular overall, it really needs to be wider than it is tall .

I may come back to you and have the top left one redone later too, just to use in the footer or something, it’s so good it seems a shame not to use that one as well at some point!''